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 No.42295

post poem in this thread
whether your own, or just any that you like.

ね、くもちゃん
巣がこんな遠く
どう行き着く?
風で飛ばされて
迷わさせられた?

a waka about a spider, with 8 mora on all the lines that'd normally have seven
くもの足だからね

 No.42303

Post the waka about the baka!

 No.42306

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>>42295
Truly the work of an aesthete

 No.42310

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>>42303

このアホげ
頭の上に
よく似合い
バカもえだから
守りが落ちた

kono ahoge
atama no ue ni
yoku niai
baka moe dakara
mamori ga ochita

alternatively:
冬が来る
時におてんば
娘はも
雪に遊んで
かえるを凍る
fuyu ga kuru
toki ni otenba
musume wa mo
yuki ni asonde
kaeru o kooru

when winter comes, tomboyish daughter too will play in the snow and freeze frogs.

 No.42311

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風吹かず
月も沈まぬ
いかにして
偽の「永久」から
逃げられるかな

The wind does not blow
nor does the moon descend
in what way, I wonder
can I escape
from this false "eternity"?

 No.42312

>>42311
those old fashioned verb endings are lovely

 No.42412

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夜明けぬ
沈まぬ月は
水に浮き
青ざめた肌
腐って行くの

よるあけぬ
しずまぬつきは
みずにうき
あおざめたはだ
くさってゆくの

The sun won't rise this night
As the unsinking moon
Is reflected on the water's surface
Where the pale skin
Continues to rot.

 No.42578

暗い夜に
冒した宮から
「ナンデアレ?!ー」


kurai yo ni
okashita miya kara
"NANDE AREEEEEEEEEE"

 No.43394

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I had a dream the other day
The future came and went away
With all the things mine eyes have seen
And every place that I have been

It told each thing its proper place
Each bit of stuff in the machine
Strewn across an emptied space
With thought and memory in between

It came back to attend its birth
And told each thing it met its worth
it seemed so thin, to hide its face
its mind made out of gossamer lace

Then it subsumed my very thoughts
into its volumes they diffused
Flesh and blood were all for naught
For we shall all be ordered too

I had a dream the other day
god came down and took me away
I became an echo in her ear
A spectre within heavens spheres
A faint ripple upon the sea
What will become comes soon to be.

 No.43395

>>43394
very nice

 No.43446

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Here is a Haiku about the wolves in Japan.

I walk
With the wolf
That is no more

 No.43451

>>43446
A timeless classic.

 No.43588

where will I go?
where will I stay?
What kind of place will find my way?

Will I dress up in its clothes?
will I be something it knows?
will I frame myself to it
such so that I neatly fit?

Will I act like I belong
though I'd be soon moving on?
Will I act as though that place
had left its mark upon my face
when soon it will be far and gone?
such a pointless thing to carry on.

 No.43623

おかあさん!!
マクドナルドが
ほしいいい!!!!
おなかすいたああ!
マクドナルドが!
Hunger for the nuggers waka

 No.43624

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 No.43652

The door opens
And before me is eternity

Whose voice calls me...
...from so far away?

Someone smooths down my hair
Who are you?

My flute sings of a land
My heart so wishes for

Where time and my feelings pass by

I don't want any friends **That's a lie.**

I don't even need myself **It's the truth.**

Footprints I leave behind
Washed away

The night is mysterious
It conceals the truth

Invited by the moon
Darkness spreads through the sky

The night is violet
Tears fall like rain

The sky cries for me

 No.43704

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writing poems

 No.43727

A silver spring in a nighttime field, rises up from far distant depths.

The tears of the snake that's lived a thousand years,

trying to bring the beautiful mayfly back to life a thousand times,

weeping tears of love.

A thousand springs, sparkling like silver.

 No.43729

waka shaped heap of noun and verb phrases
冬の朝
灰色の空
空気煙る
灰皿の土
吸っている風

 No.43761

月見えね
暗い夜の風
泣いている
森の奥から
彎月の歯だ
tsuki miene
kurai yo no kaze
naiteiru
mori no oku kara
wantsuki no ha da

何も風
皮膚が冷やさず
城内が
崩れてる砂
に守られるの
nanimo kaze
hifu ga hiyasazu
jounai ga
kuzureteru suna
ni mamorareru no

 No.43789

>>43761
I just realized that was the wrong なく
鳴いている
not 泣いている
ω`)

 No.43825

>>43789
thanks for all your hard work

 No.43894

After a slew of bugs related to variables being trampled because glibc functions return weird types of ints with special names that dont indicate their width:

pay thee tribute to the gnu
in numbers strange and type names too
else woe betide thee and thy vars
their trampled bits strewn near and far

 No.43899

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>>43761
(Assuming you didn't typo) 見えね isn't a proper conjugation, it should be みえねえ or any of the variations (えぇ, えー), but they're too long for your mora count. This is where you go fancy and use 見えぬ (●ᴗ●)
In 暗い夜の風, you can use 夜風 instead and couple if with は at the end of the line to fall into the right track again and add some layer of depth
暗い夜風は
鳴いている

-

崩れてる砂
に守られるの

Particles usually go at the end of the lines, but this is just based on my experience reading poetry (i.e. I'm not sure if it's part of the rules or not), you probably want to change it to 崩れる砂に (attributive verbs usually do well without conjugation, 連体形 is a problem mostly when you write in classical japanese).


Although these are just things I'd do myself, feel free to disregard the advice if you did it for creative liberty.

 No.43902

>>43899
Those are good points, thank you!

 No.44047

ゲームでは
こおね休まぬ
RPG犬
JRPGなのに
そぎ落としすぎ

geemu de wa
koone yasumanu
RPG inu
JRPG na no ni
sogiotoshisugi

 No.44309

an insubordinate waka
BASTARDS MAKE ME RUN
MORNING TIL THE SETTING SUN
GETTING SICK OF THIS
I DONT KNOW BUT IVE BEEN TOLD
FRAG YOUR C.O, LEAVE 'EM COLD

 No.44330

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うゎ、眩暈
頭クラクラ
くるくると
廻って廻わる
くるくる廻る

うゎ、めまい
あたまクラクラ
くるくると
まわってまわる
くるくるまわる

Ugh, I feel giddy
My head's all dizzy
It spins all over
'round and 'round
Spins all 'round

 No.44331

>>44330
Usamin.

 No.44332

>>44330
cute waka



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